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A song I wrote last year

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Intro:

This ceiling above me holds

More than just my very soul;

All I really want,

All I really need,

Is to hold you close

To me

Chorus:

Hold

My heart

Close to you, close to you

Close

Your hand

Against mine too, against mine too.

‘Cuz when the dark comes over me,

You are the light

That sets me free

Verse 1:

When I close my eyes,

I close them tight.

And when I think about you,

All goes bright,

It all goes bright.

I hold my song

Upon my mind,

Upon my mind.

I’ll love you forever,

If you promise me this:

(Solo)

Hold

My heart

Close to you, close to you

Close

Your hands

Against mine too, against mine too.

‘Cuz when the dark comes over me,

You are the light

You are the light

That sets me free.

The light that sets me free

It sets me free, ya!

Bridge:

Hold

Me tight

Upon your sweet embrace.

Hold

My heart

So it doesn’t fall to the ground.

Close

Your hands

So they’re upon mine

Close

Your hands

Tight.

When all the world comes crashing down

All I know is we’ll be in the crowd.

Telling people it’ll be all right

All you gotta do is hold someone tight.

Outro:

Hold

Me tight

Hold

Hold

Me tight

Hold

My heart

Close

Close

Your hands

Close

Close

Your hands

Upon mine

Working on it :)

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I like it, though I'm not incredibly fond of love songs, but if I was, I'm sure I would love it even more!

Now I wanna hear it with music :)

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I like it, though I'm not incredibly fond of love songs, but if I was, I'm sure I would love it even more!

Now I wanna hear it with music :)

When I get it written, I'll post the single version. I'm doing a duet, too :D

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