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Gretel

Hi I'm 13 and I would like some help with song lyrics for a christian song and possibly a band name

Here is what I have so far:

The Lord is my salvation

And I am his creation

I will not fear

for You make my path clear

It's You I seek when things look bleak

In my life I'm filled with strife.

That is all I have so far and none of it is order yet.

If someone could help that would be awesome, if not then it's ok.

have a nice day :thumbsup:

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it's beautiful i love music and singing but unfortunately every time i try to write a song i end up throwing it in the trash but i hope you'll finish and when you do i look forward listening to it and adding it on my playlist and putting it on repeat.good luck :thumbsup:

Edited by Emy

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9 hours ago, Emy said:

it's beautiful i love music and singing but unfortunately every time i try to write a song i end up throwing it in the trash but i hope you'll finish and when you do i look forward listening to it and adding it on my playlist and putting it on repeat.good luck :thumbsup:

thnx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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You fill the hole in my soul

burning coal

turns into flame

if it goes out I'm the one to blame

 

Wow that's a little depressing, but it sounds good lol

Hope that helps :) 

Edited by GODS_NOT_DEAD

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thank you I will try to use it, it really good :thumbsup:

3 hours ago, GODS_NOT_DEAD said:

You fill the hole in my soul

burning coal

turns into flame

if it goes out I'm the one to blame

 

Wow that's a little depressing, but it sounds good lol

Hope that helps :) 

 

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Here is some more I came up with w/ GODS_NOT_DEAD's lyrics too:

 The Lord is my salvation
And I am His creation
I will not fear
For You make my path clear
It's You I seek when things are bleak
In my life I'm filled with strife
You fill the hole in my soul
burning coal
turned to flame
if it goes out
I'm to blame
Feelin' like I can barely stand
but He's right there holdin' my hand
Lift me up so I may declare Your praise
to the end of my days
You fill the hole in my soul
Burning coal
turned to flame
if it goes out
I'm to blame

tell me what y'all think it still isn't done yet though.

if there is something in here that you think doesn't fit please point it out :D

Edited by Gretel

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4 hours ago, GODS_NOT_DEAD said:

You fill the hole in my soul

burning coal

turns into flame

if it goes out I'm the one to blame

 

Wow that's a little depressing, but it sounds good lol

Hope that helps :) 

Cool lyrics, dude!

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On 9/11/2017 at 4:09 PM, Gretel said:

Here is some more I came up with w/ GODS_NOT_DEAD's lyrics too:

 The Lord is my salvation
And I am His creation
I will not fear
For You make my path clear
It's You I seek when things are bleak
In my life I'm filled with strife
You fill the hole in my soul
burning coal
turned to flame
if it goes out
I'm to blame
Feelin' like I can barely stand
but He's right there holdin' my hand
Lift me up so I may declare Your praise
to the end of my days
You fill the hole in my soul
Burning coal
turned to flame
if it goes out
I'm to blame

tell me what y'all think it still isn't done yet though.

if there is something in here that you think doesn't fit please point it out :D

I Think it works. I'm not a professional music writer but I like it.

On 9/11/2017 at 4:10 PM, Delores Stariana said:

Cool lyrics, dude!

Thanks Delores :) 

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9 minutes ago, GODS_NOT_DEAD said:

I Think it works. I'm not a professional music writer but I like it.

Thanks Delores :) 

No problem. :)

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