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    In the final push for victory, the Rebels once and for all broke though the Communist forces, going onward to decimate the Communists government. AFter the main branch of the Communist government was destroyed, it did not take long for the rest to falter and fall for the last time.With the Communists gone, the people of the world could experience freedoms nbever known to them before. THe Rebels let people do as they pleased at first, until they realized that that idea was turning out worse than the Communist ideals. The original Rebels got together and decided the world needed a government. Not a constricting communist government, but a looser government. A Republic. To form the Grand Republic as the Rebels called it, they pulled together the Constitutions of the old world countries, countries that had been free before the Communists had taken over, Such as The USA, Great Britain, France, Israel, ect. With the help of the thought to be destroyed constitutions, the Rebels took leadership and formed a government. THe idea of a government worried people at first, fearing they would go back to Communist style. It took some explaining, but the world knew it needed leaders, and after explaining to the people that the Governement was there to serve the people, they were a little more acceptant to the idea.
    IT all worked out fine and great. The New Grand Republic was being led by prominent Rebel figures and heroes such as Rilian, Toad, Arkite, Swampfox, Samantha, Reid, and many other Rebel leaders and officers, who represented different regions of the world. Life was a bliss, until these people started passing away. After their leaders died, people had no clue what to do. They had not the time, reasources, nor knowledge of how to conduct an election, or anything of the sort. Just as what was left of the Rebel leaders (though they weren't really rebels anymore) were coming up with a plan, the worst happened. Powerful people rose up to rule their regions, splitting off from the New Grand Republic, to govern themselves, most of these places turned into regions ruled by dictators. As Rebel power slipped away more and more, hundreds of dictators rose, all until the New Grand Republic was only one small region, back in the Secrets Isle, where the REbels had had their base during Communist Rule.
    The Dictators of the World constantly went to war, greedy for more and more territory. THey were destroying each other, the people, and the world. And all the Rebels could do was sit and watch. THe last of the the original Rebel leaders that had led to Rebels to victory against the Communists had passd away. Arkite and Toad were recorded to have died at almost the exact same time, both saying with their dying breath "We failed..." As the world slipped futrther and further into chaos, it had become strikingly apparent, that they had indeed failed, but that their might still be hope for the world.
    Over time, one dictator rose high above the rest. He was a grand military strategist, and had conquered almost all of the European and Middle Eastern regions, including Britain, France, and Israel. He pushed onward, destroying all who stood in his way. He planned to conquer the whole world, and afterwards threatens to bring back the Communist government. He is unthreatened, untouchable, until one day. One day, when a small groud of kids discover an ancient puzzle, an unknown weapon, that could bring this man down. What is this weapon? No one knows, it is sealed in a solid stone puzzle box of sorts. All anyone knows, is that it could destroy the empire of this powerful dictator. Unfortunately, the dictator knows they have the box, and will do anything to stop them from using it, sending his soldiers, also known as the DoomBringers, to hunt them down. Now, the kids must fight and run their way to Secrets Isle, which for the second time in it's history, has dissappeared. For there, the kids will find safe haven, and possibly a way to use the weapon and bring down this all too powerful dictator. But first, they have to survive.

    I know its a lot to read, sorry, but this had to have a good background. Anyways, this is where you come in, either join these kids in their search for Secrets Isle, or join the DoomBringers in hunting them down. Veterans of the last Communism RPG, please note that this is about 2 to 3 generations after the first one, if you wanna make your character a descendant of your original Communism character, feel free to do so. Your profile layout should be as follows:

    Name:
    Age: Anywhere above 13 should work. If your in your teens, please know that the dictator guy has been in power for pretty much all your life.
    Gender:
    Side: DoomBringers or Rebels (the rebels in this story are the kids fleeing to Secrets Isle)
    Weapon: Something futuristic, but not too far so, and remember, don't load your character down with beastly weapons, be realistic.
    Description: What they look like and how they act
    History: What's your characters story?
    Other: Anything not included in the catagories above, or something I forgot, you don't have to fill this one out.

    And my profile:

    Name: Abel Alraida
    Age: 15
    Gender: Male
    Side: Rebels

    Weapon: Twin laser pistols that he always carries at his hip. THe pistols are solid black with angel wings designed on the right side of one and on the left side of the other. THe barrels are roughly 5.5 inches long and fire bright white plasma shots that deliver a powerful punch. He also carries a fancy laser-pocket knife that was said to have belonged to his great grandfather.

    Description: About 5'8" and 125 pounds. Abel spends a lot of time in the sun, so his skin is quite tanned. Somewhat muscular, athletically built. Generally seen wearing a dark blue, pointy collared jacket with a white t-shirt underneath, along with good old jeans. All fururistic of course, but the clothes tend to look the same. Abel has long black hair that covers the tops of his foggy, hazel eyes. Abel tends to act very dark, subtle, secretive. He would appear as very reserved, and somewhat shy, and sad. Abel has plenty of trust issues, but once you can get him to trust you, he's a loyal and good friend. Though he is quiet around those he doesn't know, he can be very loud and happy around his friends. A very deep thinker, and one who won't give up for anything.

    History: He has spent the last few years searching for a way to bring down the Great dictator, ever since he watched his father die trying in a failed rebellion four years ago, when his life had been somewhat normal and boring. His fathers death opened up Abels eyes to the true evils of the Dictator, and now he plans to bring him down.
    God

    kid: stupid nerd
    nerd: That's an oxymoron if I've ever heard one.

    There, is this better for you dear?

    The world just keeps you at an arm's length.
    Every week you work up the strength to fight the flames that are hurled.
    Let your faith shine right through.
    You know it's the world versus Jesus and you. - Relient K

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    Name: Taylor

    Age: 16

    Gender: female

    Side: Rebel

    Weapon: One small laser pistol that she wears hidden inside her boot and six throwing discs with laser edges that return to her when she whistles a special note sequance and can cut through just about anything. She built them with the help of her older brother.

    Description: Except she's dyed her hair brown so that she doesn't stand out in a crowd and doesn't wear the necklace were it can be seen.


    Taylor is outspoken and can be rather violent(though she might seem harmless she really isn't), usually prefering to fight rather than talk about something. A dangerous enemy but a very loyal friend. Never forgives or forgets.

    History: Technically Taylor doesn't exist, she isn't in any governments records. Her family was part of a small resistance group that lived completly "off the grid". Though they're numbers were small they managed to inflict alot of damage until someone betrayed them. The traitor gave the location of the group's secret base to the DoomBringers, when they showed up nearly all Taylor's friends and family were either killed or captured. TAylor's older brother sacrificed himself so that she could escape and as far as she knows shes the only one who escaped from the Doom Bringers on that awful night. She is doing her best to stay hidden but also find a way to bring down the dictator and his DoomBringers. For her its either destroy the man responsible for her family's death or die trying, surrender is not an option.

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    Name:abundance tod ( people call him toad after his father )
    Age: 15
    Gender:male
    Side: Rebels
    weapons: 2 laser swords * his grand fathers * 2 laser pistols * grand/gread fathers * and a very good computer hacker
    Description: http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad160/L...esAnimeBoy2.jpg his shirt is black with a leather jacket and he has a pair of ripped dirty jeans. he is always * usally * energetic optimistic and happy he is also somewhat of a computer hacker
    History: he is good friends with abel ( hope you dont mind ) seing as their descendants were good friends they seem like the most horrible team but they work great together
    Other: hi
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    Yeah, thets right, Sam can't die, but she might've had children along the way, so you can bring both her and her descendant into the story, or she might not have had kids, whatever you wanna do with that whole thing is fine by me.
    And Narnia, the only problem I found with your profile is that Toad was his father, remember that this is 2 to 3 generations after Arkite and Toad, so he'd either be grandfather or great grandfather, minor details, but still good to know. So everything ccan stay the same there, just Toad is a couple generations back.
    God

    kid: stupid nerd
    nerd: That's an oxymoron if I've ever heard one.

    There, is this better for you dear?

    The world just keeps you at an arm's length.
    Every week you work up the strength to fight the flames that are hurled.
    Let your faith shine right through.
    You know it's the world versus Jesus and you. - Relient K

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    sorry i thought of that the whole time you know what i mean
    I loveded you piggy I loveded you! -G.I.R
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    OT: Well, I suppose I'll start then

    ~Abel~

    Rumors. All rumors. All I seem to follow these days are simple rumors and riddles. I need proof. Yes proof, proof tat the dictator could be destroyed, proof that there was a weapon to take him down. I was walking in the forest, well, as much of a forest as the world had left. Mostly, just a small woodland made up of a couple hundred young trees. Luckily for the trees though, the world had gone almost comepletely metal, we had no use for flimsy things such as wood and paper, it was all war, and so it all had to be strong, giving trees a chance to grow back, which was good. THis area was a favorite of mine, partly because most people didn't exactly like it, and partly because it was where the least of the dictators eyes would be, giving me a chance to research. Research what you might wonder, well, simply research a way to take him down.
    I sat down on a stump as I did my research, and once again realized how uncomfortable nature could be. But that was no matter, because no matter how uncomfortable, nature would always provide for us, that is one of many things man has forgotten over the decades. That was something my father had taught me, before he died. My mind went back to that day, a day of fire and riots, the details were foggy, I was young, what can I say. THe only memories of that day which are sharp, was me being told my father was killed, and the dictator pronounces his grand victory over the rebels that day on television. THe dictator. I hate that man with a passion, obviously, or I wouldn't be trying to find a way to kill him. A leaf rustled to my right as a heavy breeze blew, snapping me out of my daydream, or daynightmare, and back to my work, my research. Not a moment was to be wasted, another of my fathers great philosophies.
    I moved information about my electronic pad, basically a flat, portable computer. AS I said, rumors. Rumors were all I had to run on to bring down the dictator,they were the best I was going to get so far, so I went with them.A weapon that could bring down a dictator, thats what I was looking for, I read as much information as possible on this so called weapon, but yet, to no avail, so thus, I continue researching in my peaceful forest.
    God

    kid: stupid nerd
    nerd: That's an oxymoron if I've ever heard one.

    There, is this better for you dear?

    The world just keeps you at an arm's length.
    Every week you work up the strength to fight the flames that are hurled.
    Let your faith shine right through.
    You know it's the world versus Jesus and you. - Relient K

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    Ah, the trees not my favorite place to be but great for hoverboarding. As I hoverboarded zig-zagging through trees I pressed the button I added and shot into the air. " I love this! " I screamed as i did a nosedive I pulled up at the last second and headed straight for abel. " Abel watch out ! " I screeched good thing I stopped before I hit him. " So what are you doing in a fancy place like this en'. "
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    Taylor

    Taylor crouched low over the handlle bars of the sleek, speeding motorcycle and try'd to coax just ab it more speed out of the darned thing. She glanced behind her quickly, they weren't catching up but neither had she managed to lose them. She still couldn't figure out how they'd found her, she'd done everything right but somehow they'd...

    Taylor turned sharply, her foot nearly scraping the ground as she sped around the corner of an old building. She decided she'd have to think about why she was being chased later, for now she needed to focus on getting away. There weren't exactly many places to hide along this dirt road, but if she was right it forked up ahead and the left fork would be her ticket to freedom.

    Taylor glanced behind her again, at first she didn't see anything due to all the dust her bike had stirred up, but she saw them soon enough, a little too close for comfort.

    The fork appeard suddenly and Taylor sped down the left side. If her memory served her correctly the road would dead end right at the edge of a cliff, at the bottom of the clif was a deep lake and beyond the lake, a forest. It was a crazy idea she knew but it was really her only chance.

    She left the cover of the trees suddenly and sped over the remaining ground in less than no time. Behind her she could hear the Doombringers braking they're bike's. They didn't now what was at the botom of the clift and to them it looked like Taylor was going to suicide.

    Then there was no more road, just water almost forty feet down. Taylor let go of the bike and sucked in a deep breath, trying to twist so that she would enter the water at an angle. She succeded somewhat, Crap this is gonna hurt... Then she struck the water...

    ----

    From above the men would been chasing her, the Doombringers, watched for nearly ten minutes but nothing ever resurfaced among the ripples the bike and Taylor's splash had caused....

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    Nameelzen Carnage
    Age: 23
    Gender: Male
    Side: DoomBringers
    Weapon:A three barreled laser sawed off shot gun, two laser claws, and a sword from the past inhanced by engineering allowing it to take blows from lasers.
    Description: He is a sick and twisted human being, just like his father, General Carnage. BLOOOD.
    History: Delzen was born into the family of General Carnage, and was possesed by the demons that have went with his family since Middle Ages, he hated the Great "Repukelic" as he called it. When the dectaitor took his postion he rejoiced, he would have revenge for his father's death. The hatetred is always in his heart.
    Other: Yes, he his possesed by the Demon, Carnage. lolz. It don't give him special powers, just makes him sadistic.

    Delzen

    Just like his father, he was not one to go with the crowd. The woman they had been chasing drove like she knew were she was going. She knew the lake was down here. And so, he had let the men go home, and he himself climbed down the cliff and waited in the shadows.

    A shiver went down his spine. This was the thrill of the hunt. The Rebels would die by his hands, just like his father had died, slowly and painfully. He would paticulary like killing her. A tiny wolf cub passed by his perch and he jumped down, killed it and took it up to his perch and ate. What could he say, he was a lunatic.
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