So, I'm entering a writing contest, and you have to write a scene from both the victim and serial killers POV. If anyone would be up for reading it, and letting me know what they think I'd appreciate it! It doesn't have any bad language or anything, it's just kinda creepy. No one actually dies in the scene.
Anyways, I'd really really appreciate any advice or critiques you all have for me!
I'd post it, but it's a little long, probably a 5-10 minute read... so here's the link.